Lyrics / Hint of Love

Hint of Love- © Steven D. Hoheneder

I’m looking for a hint of love
Someone here or above
A love that cares and a face that wears
For me always

I need to find who I am, what I’ll be
See me, love me for who I am
But you don’t give a damn
You don’t see me as you
Just an imperfect tool

Looking for a hint of love
Someone here or above
A love that cares and a face that wears
For me always

I can’t be you and you can’t be me
I try but never see you reaching for me
Don’t know what I can do
Absent care and heart torn
Make me feel am I really borne?

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cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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hi,

i’m not sure/ your looking for a hint of love from someone..somewhere/but next you said “you” don’t give a damn/maybe you should be more clearer cause you do have talent, good form and rhymes to boot..nice job, jim

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