Lyrics / angle

we were supposed to have a night on the town
have some drinks maybe even spend you around and around

you say its alright we can do it another time

Chorus

i thought you were my angle to thee end
i thought it was somthing true but wrong again(yea)
i loved you with all my heart and i thought you did to

well whoes the fool
i wated up but you wernt there i called you again and again and again

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July 21, 2008

cooljim102055

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

well it’s a start..the lind of song you seem to be trying to writing is a v/c/v/c song…4 lines in each verse..and maybe 5-6 in the repeating chorus. have (3) verses and of course, (1) repeating chorus with the title in it, this will give you a good start, on a good song….later, jim

p.s. tip: make sure the lines rhyme in the verses the same place, usually the 2nd and 4th line..in all the verses, this again, will give you a good start…good luck….