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PAVING D WAY[MY FAVORITE]
Category: Writing and Poetry
SO BLAZED,IM AHEAD OF MY TIME.
THE STREETS ARE PAVED AND IM READY 2 RIDE.
IVE CAME THROUGH THE SLIME.
AND NOW IM SO IN MY PRIME.
LIKE LINE ANFTER LINE.
ILL BE BLOWING YOURE MIND.
YOU KNOW ME,I MAKE THE BEST EVEN BETTER.
YOURE GIRLS WONTING ME JUST AS SOON AS I MET HER.
YALL FALL SOFT LIKE A FEATHER.
I BE TOUGHER THEN LEATHER.
U THINK U MAKE IT WET.
I GET IT WET LIKE IME CONTROLLING THE WEATHER.
SHE BE GRABBING AT MY DICK JUST A HOPING ILL LET HER.
THEN U COME AROUND LIKE BABY WHATS THAT STAIN ON UR SWEATER
MY WORDS EMERGE LIKE A DOG OUT D DARK.
AND MY MINDS INCLINED TO BREATH GAS SPITTIN SPARKS!
IT AINT EVEN FAIR,I DONT EVEN BREATH AIR.
ON MY LEVEL?U COULD NEVER BE THERE.
I DONT EVEN CARE,IM 2 GREEDY 2 SHARE.
IF U ENTER MY LAYER,THERE AINT EVEN A PRAYER.
OH SHIT I THINK IM TOO BUZZED.
BUT IM A KING SO I DO WHATEVER A KING DUZZ.
BE CUZZ.I GET GREADY,STRAIGHT WAR NO PEACE,NO PEACE TREATIES.
I GET BRAIN,LIKE A ZOMBIE!
THE DEFINITION OF EXACTLY WHAT A BOMB BE.
I BLOW UP,JUST TO SEE SMOKE CLOUDS.
WELL TRY EN HOLD YO BREATH,AS I SMOKE NOW.
I GET LOONEY LIKE TUNES,STAY AS HIGH AS D MOON.
BUT IM ALL OUT OF DRANK.
STILL INHALIN THE FUMES,
U BE TRIPPIN LIKE SHROOMS.
U WONT BE SEEING ME SOON.
U COULDNT SEE ME AT ALL.
EVERY ONE SINGIN MY TUNE,
MY PICTURE UP ON YOUR WALL.
WAY 2 SMOOTH,IM ABOVE AND BEYOND.
I BE LIKE WHAT IT DO,EEEEEYYYYYYYY
U COULD CALL ME THE FONZ.
GET IN THE ZONE AND IME GONE.
GRAB THE MICROPHONE AND I OWN,
THE WHOLE DAMN WORLD,BITCHES BEST BE FETCHING THE BONE.
WHY CANT YOU LEVE ME ALONE?
TO REMAIN ON MY THRONE.
SITTIN SINGING MY SONG.
BOUT WERE DA FUCK I GO WONG?
TILL THE END,ILE CONTINUE PUTTIN IT DOWN.
LOVE THE WAY I BE RHYMING.
C ME HOLDING THE CROWN,FUCKIN COVERD IN DIAMONDS.
PEACE
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If I could give you one solid piece of advice, I’d tell you to try a lot, lot harder. I hate to sound mean but this is hardly even worth reading. If you’re looking for some honest critisism then I’ll try to help you.
First of all start spelling right. Secondly, stop trying to sound like you’re some ghetto thug superstar. Then once you do these things, stop using childish and forced rhyme schemes. After every line you forced a word to ryhme with the word above it and it made this whole “piece” boring. Hope some of this helped.
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“LIKE LINE ANFTER LINE”
“YOURE GIRLS WONTING ME JUST AS SOON AS I MET HER”
“I GET IT WET LIKE IME CONTROLLING THE WEATHER”
Ok, they’re were a few grammer and spelling errors at the beginning but this was sort of frustrating to read all of the lyrics with the different scenarious and then the constant capitalized words.
i really thoght it was good keep up the good work
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I think you have the start but the wording needs to be worked on, spelling and phrasing. You may have tried to rhyme more, using words that don’t make much sense.
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