Poetry / Miss Whisper
You’re whispering nothings in my ear
Are you saying words at all?
Your words of nothing disappear
Are you whispering at all?
Your wisp of words, that reoccurs
Are sent right through me
Your whispers were, as murmurs merge
Is someone talking to me?
Oh, it’s you again, miss out of place
What’s that? I wasn’t listening
Oh, let’s be friends and start again
It seems that now you miss me
Sorry miss memory past
But I don’t think we existed
Well I did, but I have to ask
How you could have missed it?
You’re my ideas, my thoughts
My perfect girl
The one I’m supposed to look for
Oh no, but I won’t get caught
In a made up world
Like you’d read in a romance book store
Now go away until the day
I feel the need to read you
I have to say I hate the way
My words, they seem to feed you
When I’m ready I’ll start to look
I know someday I’ll face her
You have no idea what it took
To not give up and erase her
Who am I talking to? Oh you just missed her
She’s miss whisper and I’m her mister
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Can I give it a 100?
I loved it. I have to say I hate the way
My words, the seem to feed you.
Your words are so full of poetic nourishment, I long to be insatiably parched, so I may dive into you and over indulge my heart.
Miss whisper. beautiful.
Miss out of place. Feeling it.
Miss memory past.
Another work of art.
I jumping out of my skin.
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This work has an airy, elusive quality to it which I enjoy. This shows how haunting our ideals can be when they seem almost close enough to touch, yet somehow still without our reach.
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