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Crack, peck, push – Easter breakfast runs!

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hpudding1 avatar General Stranger

November 09, 2009

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spiritualdeciple avatar General Stranger

August 01, 2009

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Can we find out more about what you have written before ? As I’m very deeply interested in this.

kay2383 avatar General Stranger

May 26, 2009

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I thought this was kind of cute, but only after i read your notes at the top. I tried to imagin cracking open an egg for breakfast and a baby chick popping out..would be very strange.

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August 19, 2008

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Deliciously surprising and witty.

I loved it.

D.C

Zakari39 avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Made me smile. I can imagine being rather freaked out by such an occurence!

The first 3 words are nice and crisp…it’s like a mini Haiku!

MarieHammer avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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Interesting. I mean, you could make this work… as a childrens’ book. But this little poem doesn’t really do it for me.

jcextra avatar General Stranger

July 18, 2008

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This was cute. You can imagine it is Easter and these are the sounds you hear on Easter

youngjed avatar General Stranger

July 18, 2008

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the runs image is nice

Bluedolphin avatar General Stranger

July 17, 2008

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I found it cute. However, I would change the word “push” to ….. pop.

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July 17, 2008

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that’s what happens when you try to eat raw eggs. lol

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Age: 39
Loc: United Kingdom
Gen: F
Last Login: December 08
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