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Short Story / Suprise!
Crack, peck, push – Easter breakfast runs!
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I thought this was kind of cute, but only after i read your notes at the top. I tried to imagin cracking open an egg for breakfast and a baby chick popping out..would be very strange.
Deliciously surprising and witty.
I loved it.
D.C
Made me smile. I can imagine being rather freaked out by such an occurence!
The first 3 words are nice and crisp…it’s like a mini Haiku!
Interesting. I mean, you could make this work… as a childrens’ book. But this little poem doesn’t really do it for me.
This was cute. You can imagine it is Easter and these are the sounds you hear on Easter
I found it cute. However, I would change the word “push” to ….. pop.
that’s what happens when you try to eat raw eggs. lol
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