Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir (Analysis)

Not terribly unique, but sweet.  The comma should probably be a semicolon.  :)

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August 22, 2008

by Winter

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It actually worked much better as part of a rant on my blog when someone at my office tried to get me in trouble over my blog. LOL I used the 6 word memoir as a slap at them. Heh.

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short, straight to the point, not bad, but not unheard of.

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August 22, 2008

by Winter

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Thanks for the review!

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Very well said, in order to get into someone’s head and heart you have to look at things from their point of view. Many people write their feelings down, but not everyone will admit to it, that is the way into their core, the way to see things through their eyes

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July 19, 2008

by Winter

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Thanks for the positive review!

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I can certainly read your words.  As far as “knowing your heart,” I’m not sure.  I can maybe “feel” your heart or “empathize” with your heart but I just don’t know if I can know it.  I barely know my own heart.  Like strangers sometimes, we are.  

Tight 6 words.  Ripe.  In a good way. Thanks for sharing.  

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July 18, 2008

by Winter

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I figure if people have read the body of my work… they will know my heart. My blog readers and the readers of the serial I write got it. I know that it’s tough to do so when you haven’t read any of my other work. Thanks for the review.

July 18, 2008

by Marvin

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you’re welcome.  thanks for sharing.

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It’s hard to be profound when you have 6 words to do it with.  I was thinking more of “See my actions, know my heart”.  Something along that line would have carried more weight.

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July 18, 2008

by Winter

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As a writer, the words I place on paper are my actions. In one way or another, every word I write tells my story, because they are all part of who I am. Thanks for the review.

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well it is truthful isnt it.

i really like this  
read my words   know my heart
simple  to the point
expressive  
passionate

Six Word Review

Read my bracelet. Know my affliction.

I am awake at an hour when wakefulness is most obscene, so will scramble this and take unforgivable liberties with it:

know my read heartwords
my heart words red

[I imagine something written in blood. Morbidness comprises seventy-eight ninety-ninths of my charm. The rest is packing peanuts and styrofoam]

You could really Dr. Suess this, if you wanted to. If you wanted to, you could write six words seven separate ways from Timbuktu.

Maybe I could read you heartwards, as in toward? I imagine a pleasant journey or blissful laparoscopic surgery, fraught with purple pulsations and steady tribal drumbeats.

Yes, I like this poem very much.

Very good ,as i read this work i smile and my heart skiped a beat .We all want our work to reach someone.

Your words touch my soul, deeply