Poetry / Six word memoirs

This was pretty interesting, it allowed the reader to wonder what would cause the internal battle within you. Also, because it is a six-word memoir, it allows them to imagine what happened after they wonder. I enjoyed it.

Nice poem.  Works better as poem than six word story.  Not to take away from the work.  Six word poems aren’t easy either.  If I may, I’d like to take your ‘notes for reviewer’ and add one word:

Instructions: All answers are inside us

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November 14, 2008

by viri66

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Hi fred, thank for your words.

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You express yourself well here. I enjoyed reading this .It is intersting .Kept me thinking.

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July 18, 2008

by viri66

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thanks, this is what is all about.

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