Poetry / Six word memoirs

Good. Evil. Consciousness. Internal fight. Me.

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November 13, 2008

fred_kane

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54	M	Dalzell, SC	April 03

fred_kane reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Nice poem. Works better as poem than six word story. Not to take away from the work. Six word poems aren’t easy either. If I may, I’d like to take your ‘notes for reviewer’ and add one word:

Instructions: All answers are inside us

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July 18, 2008

BPL

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32	F	United States	September 23

BPL reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

You express yourself well here. I enjoyed reading this .It is intersting .Kept me thinking.

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December 28, 2008

Rebelsfire

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15	F	Draper, UT	October 21

Rebelsfire reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

This was pretty interesting, it allowed the reader to wonder what would cause the internal battle within you. Also, because it is a six-word memoir, it allows them to imagine what happened after they wonder. I enjoyed it.