Lyrics / Out There

If I’m not too strong for you,
Then I’m too strong for myself.
If you’re strong enough for all the world,
You’re too weak to see yourself.

If I’m not too weak for you,
Then I’m weak enough to see
All the things that added up
To this terrible disease.

This is not a dying dream,
This is not a nightmare.
This is your reality;
The world is waiting out there.

If I’m not too close to you
Then I’m too far from myself.
If you’re not too cold to feel,
Then prove it to yourself.

This is not an ending,
Though there’s no guarantee.
Get out there and be free
And then come home to me.

This is not a dying dream,
This is not a nightmare.
This is your reality;
The world is waiting out there.

This is not a dying dream,
This is not a nightmare.
This is your reality;
The world is waiting out there.

You need to log in to urbis or create an urbis account to review this writing.

Reviews

Sort Reviews by  Newest |  Oldest |  Highest Quality |  Lowest Quality |  Newest Comments | 

 
cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

cooljim102055

personal info reviewer stats
cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

it’s nice and constant with the flowing of the lyrics.i think i would name it out there in the world, just to answer any questions..on out there, and i would come up with another ryhme to replace myself and yourself one time because it’s not good to use the samr rhyme twice like that, just a tweak here and there, i hope i was of some help…:)jim

Showing 1 - 1 of 1

Creator
Agonyzer avatar

Agonyzer

Age: 35
Loc: -
Gen:
Last Login: July 28
Relevant Links
Item Stats

GENERAL

1 Review 0 Comments
Version 1
Latest Activity: about 1 month ago

REVIEW QUEUE

Appeared in Queue: 1 Time
Skipped: 0 Times
Large_criteria Ratings & Rankings
Tags

There are no tags for this item.