Poetry / six word memeoir #2
silvery
iridescent
beads
spring
or
fall.
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This is interesting – I’m just not sure how it is a memoir.
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Spring or fall, jump or drop? I read this two ways and liked it like that.
Cute double entendre – now I have a pleasant slow motion image of the splash and drip of raindrops on a now-less-lonely leaf. It’s wonderful. Thank you. Also – great spacing.
It sounds like you are describing dew drops? Nicely done
pretty visions in my head
I dont understand. Are you talking about weather or action ?You need to make this clear .
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