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Pen, CHECK! Paper, CHECK! writer’s block
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i love when i actually feel i can coment on these.
here you may want to consider “pen paper, check. writers block CHECK!” just a thought
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Since the first part of this was punctuated so well, it seems to me the second part should be done like this: ”Writer’s block.”
Otherwise, cute. Good title.
I like it and I do hate the problem. possibly add another “CHECK!” and the end. Or try having the other “CHECK!”s not is capitals and have the one after writers block in all caps. I am guessing you have to have 6 words. Maybe: Pen, paper, Check. Writer’s block CHECK! Maybe not, either way I like it.
Love the humor. Not easy to tell a joke or the truth in so few words.
Haha! Oh yes, that situation is not one anybody wants to be in. It was very clever, and it made me smile, it’s so true. =]
Yes, I really do hate this situation. The title you have given this piece really made it stand out to me in my review queue. Personally I would add a period to the very end – to us writers, “writers block” is such a final phrase – a period would help that image here.
This works well—a complete scenario captured in these words. I wouldn’t change it at all.
Right on target! (Did you realize your “notes for reviewer” is 6 words?)
Get away from the desk and have a breather instead of six word story. Put six words together then connent them with the next six.
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