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Pen, CHECK! Paper, CHECK!   writer’s block

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JeanJefferies avatar General Stranger

August 05, 2008

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i love when i actually feel i can coment on these.
here you may want to consider “pen paper, check. writers block CHECK!” just a thought

Ctoyboy3 avatar General Stranger

August 02, 2008

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yes its the worst

ruthybird avatar General Stranger

July 31, 2008

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Since the first part of this was punctuated so well, it seems to me the second part should be done like this:  ”Writer’s block.”
Otherwise, cute.  Good title.

Spunkles avatar General Stranger

July 24, 2008

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I like it and I do hate the problem. possibly add another “CHECK!” and the end. Or try having the other “CHECK!”s not is capitals and have the one after writers block in all caps. I am guessing you have to have 6 words. Maybe: Pen, paper, Check. Writer’s block CHECK! Maybe not, either way I like it.

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July 23, 2008

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Love the humor. Not easy to tell a joke or the truth in so few words.

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July 23, 2008

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Haha! Oh yes, that situation is not one anybody wants to be in. It was very clever, and it made me smile, it’s so true. =]

pixistardust avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Yes, I really do hate this situation. The title you have given this piece really made it stand out to me in my review queue. Personally I would add a period to the very end – to us writers, “writers block” is such a final phrase – a period would help that image here.

NightRainbow avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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This works well—a complete scenario captured in these words.  I wouldn’t change it at all.

pradapoet avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Right on target! (Did you realize your “notes for reviewer” is 6 words?)

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July 20, 2008

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Get away from the desk and have a breather instead of six word story. Put six words together then connent them with the next six.

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