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Never a bridesmaid, always a bride.
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always a reader never published…is that what you mean?
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It’s definitely evocative, and I love the spin on the over-used little saying – that’s terribly clever. It also says a lot about the character and the culture/setting she’s in, which is impressive considering there are such few words. I love it.
I guess my problem with this is that, while it tells a story, it just plays cute on a cliche. It’s about the equivilant of saying, “With my shoddy sewing, a stitch, in time, saves nothing.”
Yes, I see the duality of someone who is quick in love, but doesn’t have any lasting friendships, so much so that she has never been involved in a wedding that wasn’t her own. However, There are stronger ways to state this than just switching a cliche around to suit your purpose.
I mean, it’s cute, but I think it’s a little trite to showcase your talent.
an old saying but not true:O)
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