Quotes / Six Words for Urbis and Smith

Inspire to write, write to inspire.  

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CupofPoison avatar General Stranger

April 18, 2009

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Very nice. I like that you turned it around like that; it’s definitely a quoteable little piece. Very simple, and every word counts—-an essential part of the six-word story style. Very nice work.

Eboneezer avatar General Stranger

July 23, 2008

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It fits the criteria but the words just aren’t powerful enough for me.  Try to play with the words a little bit more.  Maybe in your font size you could create some sort of mirrored visual effect for the reader as you’ve come up with a great way to use the same words over and over:

Inspire to write|etirw ot eripsnI
Inspire to write|write to inspirE (would work better if we could actually mess with the fonts here.  but i think you catch my drift)

Bullyshero avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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I think this would have been more to the point if written as “Aspire to write, write to inspire.” For you yourself have to be inspired in order to write. The thought was there but one word need changing.
Trish

RichardCockIII avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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Simple and true.  Enjoyed it very much.

Temija avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

Temija

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Much honesty and power within your 6 words.  These few words hold many truths and much anguish for writers and poets.  

Sharon avatar General Stranger

July 18, 2008

Sharon

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I like your words.  They show what you like to do and what affect that has on others.  What you write is what someone else reads.  Like this quote.  You inspired me to review.  Good for you.  It’s working already.

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