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make your dreams happen..live life

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February 18, 2009

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January 23, 2009

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Very motivational and true.  I like the way this inspires one to take responsibility for their own future, rather then the future happening to them.

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January 09, 2009

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hi there,

i agree and i like it…i think “live life and let your dreams happen” maybe a little better that you can use…but that’s just my opinion…i like the concept….:) take care..jim

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November 23, 2008

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This sounds good, but it’s been said many ways and many times before.

Living life might be require facing a daily nightmare for some who are weighed down by responsibility. This person’s dreams might not have much to do with his/her life.

I think you could improve this statement by coming up with something less vague than “live life”.  

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August 08, 2008

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you must place a space to make it six words and if you want in contest you must enter it under the opp section by scrolling down and clicking link

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August 03, 2008

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This is a nice sentiment, one we should all aspire to, but it really isn’t a six word memoir of one’s personal life, more so an axiom perhaps that is a good goal for everyone. I would try again to write your memoir in six words. Good luck.

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July 31, 2008

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I like the sentiment expressed in this memoir. The only way to make your dreams come true is to live life to the fullest. :)

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