Non-fiction / Six -Word memoir (Analysis)

Ok, good quote.  Are you sure that you weant to say “everything?”  That is a rather bold, assertive stateent; one that may force you to perform some mighty deeds or writings!
Top-notch, really made me think on this one!

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August 22, 2008

by oknapp

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Yep everything is a book. Your a book, i am a book the grass, trees, winters, summer, rivers, well they are all good fodder in pages that make a book. Yhanks you, Sandi

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Sorry to say that as a memoir i found it boring. Did not evoke any emotion in me.

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August 19, 2008

by oknapp

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Me neither. Sandi

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It is very true and explains very well how a writer thinks.  Capitalize the I, I’m sure you have heard that enough.  I might try changing book to story but that is just a personal choice, it boradens the options.

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August 16, 2008

by oknapp

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It’s not the best. But it aint the worst either. Thanks Sandi

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Very clever! this is exactly what this contest must be about, painting a masterpiece in the readers mind. You should add quotation marks for effect.

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August 13, 2008

by oknapp

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Thanks so much. Sandi

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You’re right.  That sums it up.  Good 6-word !  Everything has a story behind it.  

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August 11, 2008

by oknapp

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Thank you so much. I believe it too. Sandi

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ha ha!

A writer’s weakness. All in sight is inspiration (or burden).

Well said.

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July 22, 2008

by oknapp

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Yes, i cannot even take a ride in the car without thinking of a “what if” situation. I even study the look of the clouds.  Thanks, Sandi

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true, but not catchy or unusual enough for me, don’t think it will be noticed.

Wow. That is truly awesome. I can relate. We think alike. You must be a writer.

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July 20, 2008

by oknapp

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Yes, i do believe i am. Thank you. You must be one too. hahahahahah. Thank you, Sandi

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I like this one. It is simple and leaves a lot of spacce for imagination. Nicely done – good luck to you..

Spencer  

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July 19, 2008

by oknapp

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Thank you Spencer. Sandi

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Not a memoir, a present tense statement telling what is happening to you now.
Every writer should see it your way though.  

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July 19, 2008

by oknapp

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Thanks. You are right though. I had to try. hahahahaha

July 20, 2008

by PIMckenzie

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Glad you agree, you see, I don;t take myself or life too seriously, I look at it through a sarcastic spyglass. I only stick to definitions to stay out of trouble otherwise, I do.
I like your reviews of others, you are also to the point. I hope you’ll read my upcoming book when it gets to Amazon at the end of August.
Thanks
Peter

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