it does have a spiritual connotation. if u want to read abt it, i commented on ELBSeattle’s review further down the page. thanks for your feedback!!!
Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir
Dark to light, natural to supernatural!!
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I would get rid of the ! or just leave one. this is because you don’t really need them. also, and this is just a personal opinon, i would have said light to dark, becasue most unnatural things happen in the dark. like the consept though.
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This isn’t a story yet. Develop this so it inspires questions, as in the Hemingway baby shoes example.
Interesting concept of contrast.All or nothing comes to mind.
Best of luck for sharing this poem.
To me this has a spiritual connotation. I like it.
makes sense, but doesn’t really convey any imagery cues.
that was a very good quote that u wrote. i enjoyed it
I don’t understand what this is supposed to mean.
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