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Haiku/Senryu / clone
Sweetest memories
fade with the cherry blossom
bought in bottle
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Smintboyuk reviewed Version 7 -
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angelauddie2107 reviewed Version 4 -
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Confusing Yet Astounding! I love this Simple Peice! Memories are the Best way to Write By! Reading From them gives more thought to Be thoughts About!
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TheCiscoKid reviewed Version 4 -
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I loved the use of the descriptive, “musty”. That just brings everythinginto perspective.
artofstocks reviewed Version 4 -
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Your words get a 10 for the day:)
Claire_D reviewed Version 4 -
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Wistful haiku evoking some sense of a lost partner, or about some kind of bed-hopping/ adultery scenario. Or possibly about such an occurance in literature. Nice work.
Naushad reviewed Version 4 -
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Simply brilliant. The haiku is rich in its connotations. The best of of finding meaning in this haiku seems to be to allow the reader to see whatever meaning suits him/her. As I read the haiku, the haiku reads me. To me the meaning seems to be that of the desire for unfulfilled love. Heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter.
CourtshipLives reviewed Version 3 -
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like when someone finds an old diary and becomes obsessed with the person/person’s thoughts. nice sentiment
Fukuku reviewed Version 3 -
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solid and very enticing, thats what I love.
filbert reviewed Version 3 -
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oh…such memories
i agree
such imagery
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