Non-fiction / My Memoir

Telling, and I like how it is a kind of rallying cry. Lets put our imaginations together and see where they take us. Well said. Some people may take note of the double exclamation points (which, in typical fiction, should be used very sparringly), but this is just whimsical enough in nature that it works.

Very fun, enthusiastic, and energetic.  Great job!

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July 26, 2008

by Supernatural1

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thank you!!!

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very good but also beset by cliche

Imagination Station – very much a cliche term as is Let’s Fly.

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July 20, 2008

by Supernatural1

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i almost did “Let’s ride,” but decided i wanted something different instead, that’s why i went with “Let’s fly.” i know they’re both clichés, but i liked the term and already had my mind set on it!! :-) i’m sure i’ll change it the minute i come up with something better. thanks, though!!!

July 20, 2008

by Sweettouch

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As all writer’s do! Good Luck!

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I read ur pieace,i liked and it made me laugh. the reason why it made me laugh  cuz it made me think about all the harry potter movies,in those movies the wizdery world can not be seen by muggles, witch means non magic folks. and also about the part where you say “let’s Fly” reminds me of the movies too cuz they fly on brooms too. I did however enjoy reading it and critique it.

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July 20, 2008

by Supernatural1

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thanks for ur critique!! i’ve never seen or read any of the harry potter books/movies, so i’m not quite sure what u’re talking abt, but that’s ok!! i’ll take ur word for it!! :-) thanks again!

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