Poetry / MASSEUR (Analysis)

As interesting as 6 words can be.  Cheers.

This is an approach to writing for this contest that I haven’t seen yet. Well done on being individual.
Jodie

Poetic brain massaging for the sake of writing something.
You can do better than that.
If it is poetry, as misguided as it may seem, it is devoid of realistic concept.
Sorry but I am not inspired by your six words.  Come up with more.

hey there,

i read ur pieace and i though that you did a very good job. it was amazing that u wrote that. did u think that up urself? if u did that i was very touching and maybe one day we will all write a nice poem book or a reg book.

I don’t particularly like the sound or implications of the poem, though I respect the idea of berevity. I like the idea of ‘massaging’ a paperback, but paperback implie reading, whereas the pen writes. Perhaps your hands or eyes might massage a paperback.