Non-fiction / Another Six Word Memoir (Analysis)

As a six-word sentence, I think it’s good. As a memoir, I’m not so sure. But I do like it, because it makes me want to read more, and I guess you’d call that a success.

I really like this! This is how I want to feel someday. Very well done. An excellent memoir! :)

oh, romantic. lucky guy. i’m still waiting for that smile. i guess it means i’m waiting for life to begin. i believe it! but is yours a Writer’s memoir? i tho’t that was the assignment. maybe that’s when your writing life began! any case, good word usage. tight.

Corny, sounds like the beginning of a Harlequin romance.

hi there,

i gave you a 7 cause i like it, even though it is not what they are looking for..(i did the same thing too…:),,,they want a 6 word memoir of you and your writing…if they just wanted a 6 word phrase i would have gave you a higher score cause i do like it…later, jim

That’s sweet and easy to relate to.

I love this. Beautiful.