Non-fiction / 6 word memoir

Life spent falling between the cracks.

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JeanJefferies avatar General Stranger

August 05, 2008

JeanJefferies

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this works, does slipping fit better?

Willow_Wren avatar General Stranger

August 03, 2008

Willow_Wren

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Well, it’s good in one way because it’s clear and I know what you mean, alas, it’s a little too cliched, ‘falling between the cracks’ is OK but so overused, so for a writer I would hope for more inventiveness. But as a title, “Between the Cracks” gives it a whole other dimension without the use of the word ‘falling’ and I can see that as a title of a book. As a book title A+, as a 6 word memoir of one’s life, it needs more work and doesn’t say much. Good luck to you with everything.

Aten2727 avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

Aten2727

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A very telling memoir about your life and who are you!  Its refreshing to see a real memoir on here and not just some saying or quote.  The falling between the cracks is a bit cliche and if you could find a new way to say that you’d be golden!  Good luck!

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