Non-fiction / 6 word memoir
Life spent falling between the cracks.
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this works, does slipping fit better?
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Well, it’s good in one way because it’s clear and I know what you mean, alas, it’s a little too cliched, ‘falling between the cracks’ is OK but so overused, so for a writer I would hope for more inventiveness. But as a title, “Between the Cracks” gives it a whole other dimension without the use of the word ‘falling’ and I can see that as a title of a book. As a book title A+, as a 6 word memoir of one’s life, it needs more work and doesn’t say much. Good luck to you with everything.
A very telling memoir about your life and who are you! Its refreshing to see a real memoir on here and not just some saying or quote. The falling between the cracks is a bit cliche and if you could find a new way to say that you’d be golden! Good luck!
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