Non-fiction / Honesty

Words are music from my soul.

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Marvin avatar General Stranger

August 10, 2008

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words are music?  wouldn’t they be lyrics?  how about “voice” is music from my soul? or “expression” is music?  

i see the point you’re going for but it seems a bit muddled.  the six-word beast is a tough battle.  

i do like where it’s headed, though.  it’s a simple statement with much to say.  thanks for sharing.  

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August 09, 2008

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This is very beautiful. It really shows the passion that people have for writing, and how honest writers have to be sometimes. It also paints wonderful imagery in the reader’s mind. Bravo!

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August 08, 2008

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Very true! My only suggestion for this piece is that you might want to enter it into the 6 word memoir competition =P Good work and good luck

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August 04, 2008

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almost

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August 04, 2008

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So are you writing lyrics?  Does a story sing to you to be written?  I don’t quite understand the meaning.  If you are writing song lyrics then It’s great.  I also don’t understand the relationship of the title to the quote.

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July 30, 2008

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Very true, but you have posted it under the wrong section.

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