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i  had to up my score after rereading. it rings true and that along with bringing out emotion are how you get my score high. good luck

I think you’ve got a good one here, but perhaps you missed the chance to make it even better by going soft with the title.  My first impression before opening this was that you had a Frank Sinatra complex.  

I really like the ideas you’ve chosen to include in this, especially expelling bias.  It takes very large people to admit that they might even be biased.  You certainly see plenty of bias on the nightly news, and these people claim to be objective.  

While I do like the nouns here, emotion, bias, expression, I’m not so sure about the tense used with the verbs.  I’d like to see them present or past tense, like Capturing emotion, or expelled bias.  But I’m not sure how that would come off when repeated thrice.  

At any rate, good luck with it,

David

I like this.  I just wonder why you would expel bias in creativity?  Bias is the cornerstone of creativity!  Without it unjust governments would not come into question, nor bad people, etc. etc.  The only question is: how valuable is YOUR bias?  The rest of the world may depend on it.  Good luck.

B.

I think you hit the nail on the head. You couldn’t have said it better.

In relation to the 6-Word-Memoirs it fits but on its own, it doesn’t.

if you simply intended it for that Opportunity, then well done, I think you’ve hit the nail on the head.  If you mean for it to stand on its own, then not so much.

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July 20, 2008

by WanderingVerse

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Please could you elaborate on what you mean by “In relation to the 6-Word-Memoirs it fits but on its own, it doesn’t.” I am always interested on improving my work but I’m not sure what you mean by it not being able to stand on its own. This piece is a six-word explanation of my creative process..

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