Poetry / 6 word

wow that is bad for a writer? of are you a writer if you can’t read or write? or are you mocking thos ethat can’t read or write? that would be rather mean and condescentingt! the English teacher in me doesn’t approve. I don’t think you will win anyone over by using bad grammar and spelling. Also technicall ‘cant’ are two words ‘can not’. this may disqualify you!

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July 29, 2008

by jazzmussax

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Thanks for the comment! I really dont think Im being mean or condescenting. My job as a writer is to tell a story. or should i say open peoples eyes to my meassage. being unable to read and write is sad and me writing this like this should remind the reader about that person that was robbed of that chance to learn. ps: can not is can’t or cannot… and just read one of my poem with more than six words and as me if i cannot read or write!!!!!!!!

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Nice and original, unexpected.  I know SMITH is biased on a strong story line, which is where this wants a bit, but it’s good and enjoyable.

I don’t particularly like this quote personally, but I do understand what you’re trying to say.

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July 21, 2008

by jazzmussax

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it’s not a quote! its a poem. thank you though

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I thought the usage of the words work, I think it has some potential

very original… i luved it ;)

I like it.  It is sad not to be given opportunity to learn.  Good job.