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My life laid bare in ink

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landon_ap avatar General Stranger

December 02, 2008

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I love it!  I can not find flaw in this.  We put it all out there leaving ourselves exposed.

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November 26, 2008

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I like it, but some reason I originally read it as “My bare life laid in ink”. I liked that, but I also like what you really said. What you wrote stresses that it’s the actual “inking” of your life on paper that is making it bare, not that it was bare already.

Great Work.

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September 08, 2008

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Wow. Thats all I got. Its one of those phrases that bounces around and around in your head. Wish I thought of it….. wow…..

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August 18, 2008

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beautiful memoir. so raw. so fresh. so vulnerable. you said so much in so little. its amazing. your chances are good

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August 13, 2008

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This is able to go deeper than a lot of the other ones.  Seems to have some actual meaning rather than just people trying to win a competition.  Good Job.

Static avatar General Stranger

August 11, 2008

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So true!! A writer’s work is their life in so many ways. Writers will pour their heart and soul into their writing – both in the effort they give and the content they cover. Also, many writers will write based on their life or their desired life; a writer will rarely write about a topic of which they have no experience what so ever.

A great entry! Good work and good luck!

JeanJefferies avatar General Stranger

August 05, 2008

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close, but in my opinion needs sharper.  maybe my life specifically outlined in ink? again just suggestion. the way you have it feels close

DrChaos avatar General Stranger

August 03, 2008

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Don’t have much to add, but wanted to give a high mark for the Smith mag review.  Perfect description of a passionate writer!

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August 01, 2008

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How writers can relate. For many ink is a way for people to expose themselves to the world. You conveyed that in 6 words. Congratz! It shows the devotion and passion some people really have for writing. Almost as if it’s there oxygen. Good Job and Good Luck. With respect. -Corruptedstatic.

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July 31, 2008

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I’ve read several variations of this same theme; including one of my own submissions! These six word memoirs…

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