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My life laid bare in ink
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close, but in my opinion needs sharper. maybe my life specifically outlined in ink? again just suggestion. the way you have it feels close
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I’ve read several variations of this same theme; including one of my own submissions! These six word memoirs…
Very too the point, I would suggest adding punctuation.
That is exactly what you do as a writer. You lay your deepest, darkest experiences for everyone to see. A perfect way to describe the creative life and soul.
This one I can relate to and perceive the author’s direction. It is inspiring and motivating for one who desires to write.
Doc
Very good. Concise and clearly states your message. I might suggest replacing “life” for “life’s” as the contraction of life and is; that way, it feels more like a complete thought than a sentence fragment.
good quote…writing is just the act of taking private thoughts and making them public.
This is particularly good, I like it, its especially strong when reading it because of the duel meanings behind the words and there interpretation. As for a written qoute its great, but perhaps not so strong verbally.
Good work
Gavinswar
so true, if you write that’s all your life is. like it
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