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My life laid bare in ink

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JeanJefferies avatar General Stranger

August 05, 2008

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close, but in my opinion needs sharper.  maybe my life specifically outlined in ink? again just suggestion. the way you have it feels close

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July 31, 2008

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I’ve read several variations of this same theme; including one of my own submissions! These six word memoirs…

jdgosslee avatar General Stranger

July 25, 2008

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Very too the point, I would suggest adding punctuation.  

sjvance avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

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Original, I like this one.

gting avatar General Stranger

July 24, 2008

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That is exactly what you do as a writer. You lay your deepest, darkest experiences for everyone to see. A perfect way to describe the creative life and soul.

DoctorBerry avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

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This one I can relate to and perceive the author’s direction. It is inspiring and motivating for one who desires to write.

Doc

snarfus avatar General Stranger

December 14, 2008

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Very good. Concise and clearly states your message. I might suggest replacing “life” for “life’s” as the contraction of life and is; that way, it feels more like a complete thought than a sentence fragment.

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February 21, 2009

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good quote…writing is just the act of taking private thoughts and making them public.

Gavinswar avatar General Stranger

February 04, 2009

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This is particularly good, I like it, its especially strong when reading it because of the duel meanings behind the words and there interpretation. As for a written qoute its great, but perhaps not so strong verbally.
Good work
Gavinswar

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February 15, 2009

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so true, if you write that’s all your life is. like it

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