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That is the life of writing, yes?  I like this one.  You have way too many rating criteria on this six-word memoir.  You have one twice, and you only need one on publishers.  But you have captured the characteristics of a writer.

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August 07, 2008

by docmad

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thank you its appreciated

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“For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn.” An ordinary action, then the object (something filled with meaning), then a description of its condition, again filled with history and emotion. You give us a string of 6 adjectives floating in a void. It needs an anchor, something to ground it.

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August 06, 2008

by docmad

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it is not a story in 6 words its a memoir so your description completly misses the point and it is anchored as i am still very much driven

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The creative, driven part confuses me. The other words appear to be opposites yet I don’t consider creative and driven as opposites to one another. I think the other four words work for a memoir because life can be filled with many ups and downs and opposites. Its relatable, although I don’t understand how the last two fit. It’s your memoir though so it must fit your life.

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July 24, 2008

by docmad

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because a memoir is life up to the point it is written and going on forward and yes i am still creative and very driven in my writing thank you

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Interesting.  Sounds like an artist to me!

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July 21, 2008

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thank you for the kind words

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This is a memoir that could fit just about any book or poem set to be published. In just six words you’ve prety much sumed up the world and everyone in it.

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July 21, 2008

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thanks for the wonderful review it is greatly appreciated thanks again

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Appears to be more of a resume title than a short story.

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July 20, 2008

by docmad

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its supposed to be a memoir of a writer and to me and other people it describes exactly the mentality of a writer

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Says something, while saying nothing. It isn’t really a sentence. I get the jist of it, but can you construct a sentence that says it all, without just listing traits?

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July 20, 2008

by docmad

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a memoir is the traits and feelings of the person writing and these are mine struggling with my thoughts through life of my writings

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I am not sure I see the time line, A memoir is a sequence of actions or experiences.
I can see a progression if that is what you are intending. The humor also comes through.
I have felt that insanity often leads to genius, so I’ll go with you on that one.
Keep it up
PIM

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July 20, 2008

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thank you for the kind review it is much appreciated

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It doesn’t paint enough of an image. It is more of a resume tag cloud.

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July 20, 2008

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other people like and get the message

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