Short Story / Six Word Memoir

I failed to see what you were trying to convey with your six words. The meaning of your piece simply eluded me. However it was nicely written and interesting to say the least.

nicely done i like the colorful metaphors, rich full of sorrow and disdain.

So many possible interpretations just as every artist I know would consider their lives it all depends on which part is focused on. Well done.

I think these are very good and creative combinations – “Past before”,  ”future behind”,  ”walking backwards”... but these six words are not enough to express your concept or idea, so unfortunately I cannot get what it is supposed to mean. I am sorry…

hi,

i read ur piece and i thought that it was ok. it was alittle depressing tho. i think the key to everything is to walk and go forwards not backwards. backwards is ur past. maybe next time u will hit the nail on the head

Good quote. This is true of many of us from time to time. Not the best way to live, but we take what we can get.