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We are dreams in dreamer’s dreams.

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uhlexis avatar General Stranger

August 28, 2009

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It took me a couple of seconds to understand that, but when I did I smiled. Something about it is cute and has innocent. Maybe its the word “dream” because is innocent when in deep sleep.

kudos.

free2rhyme2107 avatar General Stranger

November 15, 2008

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so i had to read the quote over about 4 times. i do like how you used DREAM as a “base” word, if you will, repetitively. it adds to the whole thought provoking thing.  i think i understand the quote, kinda like someone always has it worse than you --- but instead someone is always dreaming of what you have, and your always dreaming about what the next man has.  IF i got this correct, the clarity is amazing and i completely agree.  i think that it kinda says that you have to be grateful for what you have because someone always has it worse than you do.  if i am wrong then PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE message me back as to what the real meaning is supposed to be

thanks
jm

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October 29, 2008

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I really like this quote, because that’s how I feel writers really are…sometimes I think that’s how life really is. Maybe not for everyone, but definitely for creative people.

Billy avatar General Stranger

September 26, 2008

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Nice look on an alternate reality. It’s an interesting way to look at life although I personally wouldn’t look at it that way. It has a little bit of an eerie feeling to it I guess, but a decent quote.

nelson1 avatar General Stranger

September 25, 2008

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True, in a way, sometimes people dream of being like us, or they may dream of us if they know us.

cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

September 05, 2008

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hi there,

well it sounds clever and catchy but i don’t see myself in any dream or me in any others dream, that’s for sure…but i hope your right..(like this is one big dream by God, maybe at best)..and it gets better..:),,,,jim

rekstein avatar General Stranger

July 27, 2008

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not sure i get it but let me spend some time analyzing. are we addressing Writers/Artists as the competition directs? well, we are certainly dreamers!! But you say we are dreams. So maybe some others are simply conjuring us up and we’re not real? Maybe you’re not discussing artists at all but just humanity? I’m trying. Sorry if I’m way off.

Cleveland avatar General Stranger

July 26, 2008

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Intriguing thought of within the within the within. Logical and deep rooted.
Good luck with quote.

jabf avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Good imagery. Simple and makes since.

prosevengeance avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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Vague, but not in a bad way. The repetition of the word definitely helps drive home your point. The options with this one are endless, good job.

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