Poetry / Six Word Memoir II

very nice.  did you then realize that you ARE, in fact, all of your characters?  only when i began writing did i begin to understand that i was a woman.  and a man.  and a baby.  and a cat.  and the weather.  and time.  

the moon in a dewdrop, my friend.  good work.

thanks, for sharing.  

I think this works well for a memoir of the creative life. The only reason I didn’t score you higher (i gave you a 7) is because with six words i think the reader needs at least one solid image to anchor phrase. something we can imagine with our senses, which helps us hold on to what we’ve read.

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August 09, 2008

by Marvin

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HI, AC!  

August 10, 2008

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hi mel

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Pleasant thought for a writer, probably multiple location for someone with multiple personalities.

At least it makes since when some other peoples don’t. its simple and to the point which can be good but then again for me its to simple because if going the way of simple you want it to just pop out at you and the strongest word in yours is character the other words are more less connecting words and it needs at least another strong word or something to make it pop out more. And am not feeling the word through. Maybe try from” instead I don’t know. Through I would normaly be like yeah that’s fine or even good and maybe it is but somethings off that could be better and make the quote better goodluck

seems really deep to me.

optimistic and looking to a bright and better future, however not artistic enough for my taste, anyway.

Original, clear, and a good entry.  Good luck!

I like it
I think the characters we write about portray or create often display a side of us weather hidden or unrecognized sometimes even a complete mirror image of ourselves I think you did a good job with this one.

I like this quote overall as there are two ‘find’s in these six words, and they form a rythm in it, and they are not relundunt at all. thank you.

hi,

I read ur piece and i thought it was pretty good. next time tho i think u need to be moredefining of it. but overall it was good. good luck for next time