Short Story / Six Word Memoir III

Very powerful statement, that brings layers of emotions to the table.  Good job!

Copy written it’s a riddle, the answer is SURPRISE.
I was surprised, be original.

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July 22, 2008

by prosevengeance

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Has this really been done before? If it has… oops… I thought I was being witty…

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I really like this six words. It is paradoxical.

you have a spelling mistake by the way, it should be ‘impulse’.

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July 22, 2008

by prosevengeance

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22	M	Greenwood, IN	August 15

Heh, hasty typing… Thanks for the catch.

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hi.

i read ur piece and i didnt really get it. maybe next time u need to choose words that are more helpfull to people that can better understand. good luck next time.

Interesting quote. I agree, to an extent. But in my experience, effort and impulse can be one and the same, and when they are, magic happens.