Haiku/Senryu / 6 word memoir

As a haiku I don’t get it. 5-7-5? Mind you, it’s a pretty bold attempt, and certainly inspires readers to try to match 6 words to 17 syllables.

As a 6 word memoir, it is complete, but doesn’t invoke curiosity, which is surely the underlying goal of such an artform.

The futility of this piece speaks to me in a strange sort of way.  It is as though you have given up on the prospect of finding a true muse for your art.  The search seems to have caused a rift between what you see and what is actully there making for a distorted vision, which can be in and of itself can be (if properly executed)a startling form of expession.

I like the idea of painting randomised people, but the faceless word was a puzzle. Is the viewer supposed to imagine the face? This says so much about the writer of course.

Enjoyed.
Nicky

i read ur piece and i thought it was ok. i thought it was in the midle of good and bad but not to bad and not to good. maybe next time when u write with six words to choose words that will desribe more about what u want it to mean.  this six word piece kinda left me on a cliff. better luck nxt time.

Not particularly enthralling because it doesn’t really raise any questions. It’s more a statement of fact. Makes me want to say, “Well good luck then,” rather than “Why?”