Poetry / Heartache

Based on the criteria – success!  The sentence by itself is not bad, either.  Even standing on it’s own it produces a sense of irony and sarcasm.

It holds truth, but it doesn’t bring anything new to the table.  Good job though.

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September 02, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thank you, It may not be new but the truth is alway steadfast and reliable.

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this is not a poem wheres the rest of it

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July 31, 2008

by intimate_le

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I beg to differ.  But Thanks for the review

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The challenge within this “memoir” idea is finding a way to effectively use 6 words to convey a message. You’ve found that vehicle and you ran with it. I love how much you’ve said by just using 6 words…the only word that doesn’t quite fit is the “so,” but I can’t think of another word to replace it in an effective manner.

It’s quite beautiful, I really like it.

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July 29, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thank you,  Well what,s really funny is that I said what I had to say with five words, And they would not accept it  an so, so is the only word that would fit with out taking away from what I meant to say, who ever know to little letters could do so much.

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Woah, this is good.  I love it.  Yes, only those who have lived the pain of life can really sing about it.  Good job!

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July 25, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thank you. I have gotten A few reviews on this one and people have been liking it. I think I might have a little bit of talent.

July 25, 2008

by sjvance

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I don’t agree…you have a LOT of talent!  :)

July 25, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thanks

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Sad but true. I really enjoyed this six word piece. :)

Well stated.  Well written.

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July 23, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thank you very much.

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I really like this quote because there is a sense of melody within tortures souls…we all have our own unique song.

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July 22, 2008

by intimate_le

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Yes we do thank you for relizing that and giving life to my words

July 22, 2008

by Jt311

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You are very welcome

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describes the suffering for one’s art that many must face quite nicely.

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July 22, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thank you very much that is what I was going for

July 23, 2008

by roguescholar

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mission accomplished. great job.

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I have to say this is beautiful, and it hit home for me. I was actually thinking just the other day about stuff like this, and you just put it into words. Only 1 thing: “beautifuly” should be “beautifully”.
I thought it was great, and it’s so true. Great job!

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July 22, 2008

by intimate_le

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Thank you very much for the kind words don’t tell any one I’m not the greatest speller.

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