Short Story / Six Word Memoir: A Life

I love the image that this creates. It’s so true – sorrow always has a way of “surrounding” us, but we can be optimistic and avoid those “peaks”, and be safe in a valley of happiness (that’s just how I translated it). Great work!

Sounds like the editing process to me. Nice work.

The words are pretty, but the idea is too general.. It doesn’t make me wonder about the author. I’d try to make it more personal. G’Luck!

   I like it, it’s smooth and flows well. Plus Its vary clear in its meaning, and I think vary true. The analogy of the mountaintop brings out the profound meaning of what your saying. (or a mountain top is what came to my mind when I read the word peaks)

This is actually really good

I can’t say I’ve heard of something even similar to this to be honest so that’s great!