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My favorite escape
Ink ladened creativity

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August 24, 2008

Russell_Parkway

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143	70.5% (61 votes)	48.1%

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Russell_Parkway reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

This quote speaks for all of us writers. The only thing I could suggest is that you add a question mark after escape and hyphen Ink-ladened (which should still be two words.

My favorite escape? Ink-ladened creativity.

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August 01, 2008

robinslick

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13	85.7% (7 votes)	10.4%

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48	F	Philadelphia, PA	September 28

robinslick reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

This is nice. Maybe reverse the order or even if you decide to keep it, how about an equal sign, which does not count as a word? Ink ladened creativity = my favorite escape. Your call – good job either way.

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Rob