Quotes / My manuscript doesn't have a chance...

Deprecating and charmingly funny. But not as clear as possible. Something like “My query letter comes up short” or “My query letter tells bad stories” might’ve been a more satisfying answer to the question of why your query letter is your worst enemy. But then again, I guess it’s more an explanation to the title. I’m just saying I think you could be a little more clever with the word choice to make the meaning/image more specific.  

I like it, it does pertain to your creative life.  Good job.

I think that this is a very simple statement wreaking of redundancy, because this is most writers biggest problem.  Kudos for proper grammar.  I would suggest not assigning a life the inanimate query letter.

hi there,

yes how true…even with just a memior…:) nice one, jim