Non-fiction / Hide, and Go Seek!

I think it is quite difficult for me to understand this quote, bcos my first doubt is – what are romance hides?

A romance is a very subjective and first person thing, it needs more than six word to substantiate it I think.

And then, ‘I count, and seek.’ – what do you count?

‘ROman hides’ doesn seem relate to ‘I count, and seek.’ at all, maybe you could explain it a bit more through a note or give the readers a hint through its title bcos the title – Hide, and Go Seek! doesn help the reader to understand this quote actually.

Thanks and good luck.

Short and simple.

Hello, overall, I like it but I personally word have changed ‘count’ to ‘crave’. It just seems to give it more of an emotional depth, but hey, you are the writer, write on, nice job!

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July 25, 2008

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I agree. However, I was trying to achieve playfulness. Thank you for the kind words!

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Awww this is cute and clever :) The best i’ve seen so far! :)

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July 24, 2008

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Thank you!

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Beautiful way to put it.

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July 24, 2008

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Thank you!

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well that’s a funny one :) to play hide & seek with romance. That could refer to a teen who used to play the original game and now is a loser and can’t have a girlfriend and is turned into that psycho who stalks helpless girls in parks at night. lol. That also could deal with the struggle every writer faces which is that when you have a story in your head, it starts there and the issue is that you have to transcribe it and that takes tie hence the counting and one can spend a hell of a time running after the inspiration.

tjk

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July 23, 2008

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I was referring to romance in a broader context than simply love, but I do like your interpretation. :)

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This is nice…are you implying that love is a game, or merely that you’re searching for it, and it’s hiding?

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July 23, 2008

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Neither; I am referring to romance as a way of interpreting.

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