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I picked passion. Now I’m poor.

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nelson1 avatar Random Review

September 25, 2008

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I loved this one, I know exactly how you feel, i’m the same about singing, not only are we poor financially, but people get jealous too.

debberdoo4 avatar General Stranger

August 07, 2008

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There is an large community of people who share this reality. Ain’t life grand :) liked it

Daniella avatar General Stranger

July 27, 2008

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I like the first sentence. The word poor falls flat. Good start, keep writing.

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July 27, 2008

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I thought this was straight to the point, and states its point very clearly and with a lot of humor.  It says I could’ve been successful, but I might have compromised my integrity.  I didn’t want to do that, so now I create what I want, even though it’s not lucrative.  I think you illustrated it WELL and simply.  

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July 25, 2008

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Only financially ;P

Seriously, that made me laugh; nice twist on the ‘starving artist’ phrase :)

shadowedxrain avatar General Stranger

July 24, 2008

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Dry wit. I approve.

That aside, I love the tone usage here.

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