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I picked passion. Now I’m poor.
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I loved this one, I know exactly how you feel, i’m the same about singing, not only are we poor financially, but people get jealous too.
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There is an large community of people who share this reality. Ain’t life grand :) liked it
I like the first sentence. The word poor falls flat. Good start, keep writing.
I thought this was straight to the point, and states its point very clearly and with a lot of humor. It says I could’ve been successful, but I might have compromised my integrity. I didn’t want to do that, so now I create what I want, even though it’s not lucrative. I think you illustrated it WELL and simply.
Only financially ;P
Seriously, that made me laugh; nice twist on the ‘starving artist’ phrase :)
Dry wit. I approve.
That aside, I love the tone usage here.
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