Poetry / Six Word Memoir Entry

Spoken word description of physical art presented excellently!

Suggests to my a writer/creativity.  A snapshot ot time regards to a persons lifestyle. Might I suggest condensing to I live penning dreams… that way you could use two more meaningful and descriptive words maybe.  This said, there is nothing wrong with the words you use, but it would be nice to have idea of what type of dreams you pen… Well done.

I like this statement. It is what it is, and nothing more.

I love the enigma held within this statement. The questions it poses, what it makes the readers think and feel.

Instead of a dash to separate the two words from the four, I would suggest perhaps using an ellipsis to connect it.

I like the way the ink is an after thought. It’s a good statement about writing. Certainly true for me anyway, good job.

i read ur 6 word memior and i think u  could have done alot better. i think u need to get ur head out of the clouds and think of something better to write that way we can all understand u and ur work more. better luck next time.

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August 01, 2008

by storyspinner

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I like my head in the clouds. I think it’ll stay there thank you very much.

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Do you write from your dreams?  Interesting.

Very strong words. You did a great job of using your 6 words. I thiok very few could sum it up like this. Good job!