Poetry / Six Word Memoir Entry

I love the enigma held within this statement. The questions it poses, what it makes the readers think and feel.

Instead of a dash to separate the two words from the four, I would suggest perhaps using an ellipsis to connect it.

I like the way the ink is an after thought. It’s a good statement about writing. Certainly true for me anyway, good job.

i read ur 6 word memior and i think u  could have done alot better. i think u need to get ur head out of the clouds and think of something better to write that way we can all understand u and ur work more. better luck next time.

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August 01, 2008

by storyspinner

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I like my head in the clouds. I think it’ll stay there thank you very much.

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Do you write from your dreams?  Interesting.

Very strong words. You did a great job of using your 6 words. I thiok very few could sum it up like this. Good job!