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I live through dreams – in ink

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terry_snipes avatar General Stranger

November 15, 2009

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Spoken word description of physical art presented excellently!

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January 20, 2009

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Suggests to my a writer/creativity.  A snapshot ot time regards to a persons lifestyle. Might I suggest condensing to I live penning dreams… that way you could use two more meaningful and descriptive words maybe.  This said, there is nothing wrong with the words you use, but it would be nice to have idea of what type of dreams you pen… Well done.

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October 10, 2008

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I like this statement. It is what it is, and nothing more.

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August 07, 2008

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I love the enigma held within this statement. The questions it poses, what it makes the readers think and feel.

Instead of a dash to separate the two words from the four, I would suggest perhaps using an ellipsis to connect it.

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August 03, 2008

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I like the way the ink is an after thought. It’s a good statement about writing. Certainly true for me anyway, good job.

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July 28, 2008

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i read ur 6 word memior and i think u  could have done alot better. i think u need to get ur head out of the clouds and think of something better to write that way we can all understand u and ur work more. better luck next time.

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July 26, 2008

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Do you write from your dreams?  Interesting.

Chaos avatar General Stranger

July 26, 2008

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Very strong words. You did a great job of using your 6 words. I thiok very few could sum it up like this. Good job!

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