Quotes / Six Word Memoir (Analysis)

Haha, I like this. It’s funny, and creative.

gently i say to you:

i scene, an image, an idea, is all you can accomplish with six words. try not to preach. of course this works perfectly for me because i dawdle more than i do anything else. that’s a good word choice also. good work.

Well put.

I like this and I think everyone who writes will relate to it instantly.  The only suggestion I have is that there’s a lot of punctuation for just 6 words.  I think I’d make it “Learn this: write more, dawdle less”

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July 27, 2008

by blu3fish

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The punctuation was a conscious decision in order to include a voice for both sides of my writing mind. There’s the instructive, albeit slightly forceful part and then there’s the compassionate, gentle whisper that contends my constant bickering.

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Ok- you made me smile. I get it. I get it. I just need to finish watching this show, cleaning the kitchen, mowing the lawn… Life interferes with poety!