Poetry / 6 word & I'm out of submissions darn

The only thing this has going for it is pulling off so much repetition in such a small amount of text. While it isn’t bad, it is rather mediocre, mate. So you’re creative; where’s the kick? Kudos for staying on topic and pulling off the device, but I don’t see any strengths that will make it stand above the rest of the submissions.

Hmm, it is interesting, but I think you could take it further (in either direction).  One option would be to be very obscurely creative and express the same idea without using the word creative or any of its derivatives at all.  Another would be to overkill it and find a way to sneak another version of the word or two in there.  I like how you used three different forms of the same word as opposed to repeating the same one three times.

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July 25, 2008

by LuckyHabit

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this was a revision of another persons bland expression I thought I had used over kill since 50% of the piece is a derivative of the word creative…
how about: Creation of creative creativity creating life. ~SRS
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July 25, 2008

by JohnQuick

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Creational creativity creatively creating creative creations :P

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