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Starving artist, I eat Top Ramen.

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August 06, 2008

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July 27, 2008

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Nice!  I’m a big fan of Ramen myself.  Beef is my pleasure…

I like this piece but you’ve established a near-paradox.  If the artist is starving, how can he be eating?  ”Hungry” might be a better choice if you go one way, and if another, “chews Ramen wrapper.”  

If you want him to starve he can’t eat and if you want him to eat you can’t present him as starving.  

it’s still fun, though.  i’m going to make some ramen now.  thanks.  

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July 27, 2008

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