Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Isolation in Six Words

A very solid piece… my only issue is that it’s not what one would call ‘outstanding’ which, as I’ve read many pieces, I’ve realised a piece will have to be to win this competition. I cant really suggest a way for you to improve it as you’ve done as well as you can with what you’ve got here.

Advice I WOULD give you, though, is that you’ve got a solid entry here… now try for another one where you aim for the sky… What have you got to lose?

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August 10, 2008

by dianegermano

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I agree Static. This is not “outstanding” and I did not attempt to enter it in the competition. I did enter “Isolation.”

Thanks so much for the feedback, lots of folks often skip the six word entries. Peace.

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