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Dreams… I only have to believe

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Gardenia avatar General Friend

August 02, 2008

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Gardenia reviewed Version 4 - Read 100% of the Item

And work to make them come true.

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August 02, 2008

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krill_the_killer reviewed Version 4 - Read 100% of the Item

This six word memoir is very inspiring.  It’s hopeful and optimistic.  I think it’s a great look at the creative life, given that the creative life is full of dreaming and one must believe in those dreams to make it work.  Good job.

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August 02, 2008

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Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Enough said in those 6 words. It funny how the most simple ideas can mean the most, and you really captured it. This piece speaks volumes about the writer. Though a little cliche of a memoir, nevertheless, an overall triumph of character and the human spirit. Great Job. Enjoyed the read. With respect. -Corruptedstatic.

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August 01, 2008

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I think that I may have read a previous version of this, but am not sure. This one isn’t half bad. I have always been a dream enthusiast, so can readily relate to this piece. :)

BlueJay avatar General Stranger

August 01, 2008

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BlueJay reviewed Version 4 - Read 100% of the Item

you were concise and precise so that makes this awesome, but it;s not completly original ive seen it before so all though its good try to be more creative.

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August 01, 2008

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destined2bgreat reviewed Version 4 - Read 100% of the Item

I get it and i love the intent and the message. it is just so suttle  Maybe this could be more powerful if you make dream more aggressive like—Dream’s only requirement….believe in yourself. make dream be pushy or more enticing provoking readers to want to try it out too. this would be great in a daily inspirational book if you write lots of these.

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July 31, 2008

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Perfect title for a perfect 6 word prediction and I hope it has worked well for you!  Dreams will only take you as far as you’ll let them.  Concise and beautiful!

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July 29, 2008

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trident reviewed Version 3 - Read 100% of the Item

Very optimistic statement.

I have a strong dislike of using the word ‘one’ in writing. It is so impassionate and detached. ‘I’, ‘he’ or ‘you’ would add power to this.

Nice as a motivational quote though.

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July 29, 2008

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CourtshipLives reviewed Version 3 - Read 100% of the Item

truly terse and tersely true. your chances are good.

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July 27, 2008

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hvy_mtl8089 reviewed Version 3 - Read 100% of the Item

hmm….seems confusing to me…but ill give you a 10 anyways

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