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state of being without a drug

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ScorpionHunter avatar General Friend

September 23, 2008

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What’s a state of being without a drug?/What is . . . ?

kay_kay avatar General Friend

September 16, 2008

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what does it mean?

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August 15, 2008

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I’d use punctuation, especially when something is this small and it really stands out. State of being without a drug? You’re saying you can’t write, have no appreciation of art and can’t love or aren’t loved? Wouldn’t the thrill of writing, your love of art, the adoration of others and your empathy for others be as exhilarating as a drug? You’re saying the opposite is true.

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August 01, 2008

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I basically like it, but it does leave me wondering what that state is, or what it is like.  I know, it’s only 6 words :)  Maybe you could say

without drugs …

then 4 words about you without drugs – I don’t know

MichaelDark avatar General Friend

August 01, 2008

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I give a big 10 for non-fiction, for true creativity comes from a natural mind! Talent? Shit! How do we rank talent on 6 words sooooo, I gave you a 6. One for each word. Thanks for the add and, welcome!

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July 31, 2008

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a state of being does not really fall into the guidelines of a 6 word memoir, and what is that state of being without drugs? Not all artists, writers, and lovers fall into a drugless state just because they are enamored with love, art and writing. I think this should be more personal about one’s self or life.

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July 31, 2008

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This really hits home for me.  The creative state can surely be reached without a drug.  The best way to know yourself is without a drug.  Bravo!

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July 30, 2008

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Writing,art, and love is not being on drugs? Interesting. I would argue that those are all drugs in SOME sense. Well written!

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July 29, 2008

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WHo? Life, you your mind, etc.

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