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Sounds dangerous…vehicle being alcohol I really like that line. I really liked all the lines really. Sounds like your past drives you to drink…the past is always so haunting.

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November 20, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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31	M	Lodi, CA	November 21

Yes . . . my scorpion is always with me. Thanx for your review.

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Simple and powerful.  

So very deep. I know many people this decscribes to a T. Keep up the good work.

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September 27, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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Thank you . . . .

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Wow, words expressed so right on the mark, good job!  I know exactly what the poem means.

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September 24, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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Thank you.

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It is clear to me the problem, on a personal note, i hope you overcame it.
Strong and to the point.

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September 23, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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Thank you. I will probably never overcome it, not completely anyway . . . .

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perfect summation. beautiful.

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August 19, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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Thank you . . . .

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I like this, the life of an alcoholic.  I’m very glad, however, that it is “in the past.”  The only critique I have is to make phantoms singular.  

This curious blogku captures the reason for your decline into alcoholism more succinctly than a room full of mumbling former drunks and recuperated bottle-guzzlers ever could.

Perfect.

Claire

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August 03, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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Yhank you . . . . !

August 04, 2008

by Claire_D

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Tour welcome.

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this would be great as a full poem if you add on to it. I love the use of words, the strength of them. They don’t leave the reader any doubt about how bad this situaton  was. well done.

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August 02, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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31	M	Lodi, CA	November 21

Thank you for the review! I have thought about writing a whole poem around this.

August 02, 2008

by Ctoyboy3

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you should.. or at least give it a shot and see how it comes out. Add me to your friends and I will read it if you turn it into a poem

August 02, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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I haven’t been in much of a writing mood lately, but I’ll make it a project. It’ll
take me awhile, though. It’ll be the first poem I’ve ever written about my alcoholism, and the evils and falicies thereof . . . .

August 02, 2008

by Ctoyboy3

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well once you’ve finished it… i will read it.. by all means take your time.

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This is good subject matter.  Often people feel this way and do not know how to word what they are felling.  All to often we try to escape from what we can’t explain.  Even more so what we can’t get others to help us understand.  I greatly enjoyed the verse “my destination was oblivion.”  Good jod keep up the ggod work.

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July 30, 2008

by ScorpionHunter

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Thank you for the kind review. This was just a random thought that popped out on paper, at the time I was trying to understand my past actions.

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