Humor/Satire / 6 WORD Memoir

I like this although I would change the case from all caps to sentence or title case, and possibly add an exclamation point to the end.  It expresses humor, sarcasm, frustration and many more emotions.  Nice work!

I like it, but it feels a little too try hard.  Is that really you?

Hahaha a very unique way to tell us a little about yourself. Not sure it quite fits the “creative life” description… but, still, great piece. My only suggestion would be, lose the caps…. but that’s just a neatness thing that you dont REALLY have to worry about.

Good work and good luck!

I like how you started with a well known statement , The last three will a real suprise to me , funny and thoughtful at the same time. It makes someone feel as though you have alot more to say.

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August 07, 2008

by TourmentedSoulz

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Indeed I have infinite amounts that could be said, however no six words better sums up my thoughts then this.All artists however are immortalized through their creations.

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alas! a six worder that envokes emotion, AND thought. bravo

Funny!  This one made me smile, and it tells the reader a lot about you as a person.  I love it.

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August 04, 2008

by TourmentedSoulz

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Well thank you very much, glad to people still have a sense of humor. :-)

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Death wish- or a confession that you are not good? While it is true that the old saying  goes that only the good die young- you have changed it- with wit. Nice job.

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July 31, 2008

by TourmentedSoulz

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Thank you, I also posted a revised version which says “GOOD DIE YOUNG, ALAS I’M IMMORTAL” ....

September 07, 2008

by PenelopeMV

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nice job.

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quite clever. I suggest replacing “unfortunately” with “alas”.

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July 31, 2008

by TourmentedSoulz

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I was thinking about changing it to ” good die young…alas I’m immortal”

July 31, 2008

by trident

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ha ha! I really like that! :-) See you in hell!

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I’m not sure I see the satire here but I certainly empathize w/ the feeling.