Short Story / Six Words (Analysis)

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diegolandia avatar General Stranger

September 12, 2008

diegolandia

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Funny because i can relate to this. Interesting, how you bring to light the schism which is created when man is connected to man through technology(ewven though this is probably not at all what you meant.) Thanks for the post!

Dexus avatar General Stranger

August 13, 2008

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Intriguing. The contest asks for 6 words on the “life” of a writer, but this sentence only hints at an event in someone’s life.

I don’t think it fits the criteria, but it is definitely a loaded sentence! It would be great at the beginning of a blog or a story.

sjvance avatar General Stranger

August 10, 2008

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OOPS!  Did you say something bad?  LOL  I like this one, but guess what?...you didn’t add any rating criteria.

MichaelDark avatar General Stranger

August 10, 2008

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Oh my…...
Let’s hope that changes!

intriguing.

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Loc: Grand Rapids, MN
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