Haiku/Senryu / Fooled.

People say I am
Totally myself, always
But they have been fooled

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August 10, 2008

Smintboyuk

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
412	80.2% (111 votes)	25.8%

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Smintboyuk reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I like the concept of outing yourself as being something other than what you’ve portrayed. I don’t like the way this is structured, although the redundancy in L2 does make it stand out. L3 could be much richer by avoiding the single-syllable words.