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Non-fiction / On Top of the World Soon, Very Soon.
A voice robbed of all hope.
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spiffy reviewed Version 1 -
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6 words can be better than this, there’s not much to say about 6 words, I think it is a bit generic and sounds like something that movie voice guy (R.I.P.) would say in a scene interlude.
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traceylb reviewed Version 1 -
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Being a writer, the 1st amendment is almost like having religious faith. W/out a voice, whether spoken, written or even insinuated is a voice that is lost and w/out hope.
thank you
outsider reviewed Version 1 -
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These 6 words have so much substance within them. The evoke much emotion.
sjvance reviewed Version 1 -
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Oh no! This is sad. Be what your title says, on top of the world soon. I love this, it makes me cry.
bear4 reviewed Version 1 -
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Hmm. i’m really torn here. intensely emotional six words but, i fear, they become hopelessly cliched w/o the explanation about devil’s island. when u are working with so few words you have to either twist or layer meanings to evoke interest. could you somehow work the island ref in somehow? ‘a voice robbed of all boats’ maybe? good luck.
MichaelDark reviewed Version 1 -
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I see that you are using your allotted 6 words to explain the thought behind the title OF the 6 words.
Very clever.
Alas, again I say although I appreciate this as not only creative but down right ingenius, they just won’t see it that way.
This is not to say that the 6 fall short of independence. If we have lived a creative life, to any degree, than we most surely have used the voice to which you refer.
You honor me with your request.
I would love if you would choose something from my submissions or, if you prefer…..http://www.myspace.com/michaeldark8
Ctoyboy3 reviewed Version 1 -
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so deep so sad. I think that we call can relate to that. I love the wording, the feeling that just these six words. When I read them I feet a “robbing of the hope” in my heart because I have been there. So real… wow i’m still kind of in shock that just that little phrase was able to stir me so.. now on the other hand it is slightly depressive. It makes me feel the memory of long-healed pains. But i still think that it was really good.
crstarlette reviewed Version 1 -
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probably for the best. hope is a very dangerous thing. it leads us to do all sorts of ridiculous stuff. anyway, I think many of these memoirs give glimpses into the person, but yours I think is really a life story in 6 words. I think that is more difficult to achieve. I like it.
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